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Blueberings formatted police app with poll

Post by Bluebering on Fri Dec 30, 2011 1:04 am

name:Kian
ING:Bluebering
Age:13
Gender:Boy
Location:LA CA
Global time zone:pacific time

Experence outside the server


Experence outside if the server: i dont really have much experence outsidee of the server


Experence on the server

Experence in the server: i have like 25% precent of experence on the server im not going to lie

An example of my experence




one example of my experence is: on one server i reported a greifer


the reason i want to become a police

the reason i want to become a police is because: i like to respect rules and i want to enforce the rules on this server
beacause i love this server. I dont like people who break them because i like to respect the rules. Another rason is because i want to protect this server form greifers and vandalizers. this is my fovorite server of all time. I hope you will concider choosing me and you will post good comments.

You should choose me because


you should choose me because: i respect the rules and i like to enforce them i dony like people who break the rule if someone knows the rules and breaks them ill bann him/her. i want to be a police to stop all of the greifers and vandalizers i would love to be a police an actule one its my bream job when im older. I want to stop the crime rate on the server. Because I am a trustworthy person.

something you should know about me is that

somthing you should know about me is that: ive been playing Minceraft for a long time and I am a friendy person i like to do fun thigns with other people and i help out with alot of things at my house and u should know when it's time to be serios i am when i can be funny i will be funny

contact

a way you can contact my is by my e-mail: kian.shir@yahoo.com

i hope you choose me as a police


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Re: Blueberings formatted police app with poll

Post by Jorahzo on Fri Dec 30, 2011 3:27 pm

I'll make my critique quick.

Pro's
  • At times you can be a friendly individual.
  • Your goal as a police is to stop griefers.
  • You are the most active player on the server.
  • You are a donor.


Con's
  • Your application is WAY too short.
  • Your application lacks effort in general.
  • I see a very large amount of grammar and (especially)spelling mistakes both in this application, and in-game.
  • Your reasoning is very cliché and you only gave us one reason on why you want this job.
  • Sometimes you can be quite an annoyance.
  • I've seen you abuse the powers of a donor many times, I think you will do the same with the powers of a police.
  • You get very butthurt when someone critiques your application, you then start yelling "YOU GUYS HATE MY APPLICATION". How else do you expect to improve?
  • Even after countless reminders to add a poll, you still haven't added it.
  • You keep stating you will give warnings to those who break the rules that KNOW them, we all have to look at signs with all the rules on them before actually playing on the server. If they didn't look at the rules, it's their fault.
  • Instead of editing one application, you made 3 different ones.
  • All of your edited applications give off the same message.


Overall, I see tremendous lack of effort in this application and I really don't see any potential in you as a member of the police. I would much rather see the other applicants get the job. Sorry Blue, but I don't think your fit for this role.
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Re: Blueberings formatted police app with poll

Post by Zack on Fri Dec 30, 2011 4:54 pm

Jorahzo wrote:
Overall, I see tremendous lack of effort in this application and I really don't see any potential in you as a member of the police. I would much rather see the other applicants get the job. Sorry Blue, but I don't think your fit for this role.

Sorry, but this pretty much sums it up. I really don't know what else to say.
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